Page Link:http://travelagency.dreamwidth.org/1353.html Mistake: Typos, yo: "Originally the main plot was to center aroudn the panic that surrounds a growing threat, but We were also very fond of fake news broadcasts and advertisements, a way for narrators to give an outside view of the plot and how it will be interpreted by the people at large as well as the sort of corporate marketing that exists in a universe. So much of the plot and plot announcements will depend on the news broadcasts made by Jeffers."
Word repetition: "Everyone with a pet is expected to have them licensed and, if the the character disappears, a place for them to go."
And I think there's a mention or two on the page of off season stuff---which would be redundant now if on and off season plots aren't a thing?
Re: Mistakes?
Mistake: Typos, yo: "Originally the main plot was to center aroudn the panic that surrounds a growing threat, but We were also very fond of fake news broadcasts and advertisements, a way for narrators to give an outside view of the plot and how it will be interpreted by the people at large as well as the sort of corporate marketing that exists in a universe. So much of the plot and plot announcements will depend on the news broadcasts made by Jeffers."
Word repetition: "Everyone with a pet is expected to have them licensed and, if the the character disappears, a place for them to go."
And I think there's a mention or two on the page of off season stuff---which would be redundant now if on and off season plots aren't a thing?
Page Link: http://travelagency.dreamwidth.org/5943.html
Mistake: Town info page inaccessible and listed as a protected entry.